Wikipedia:Cleanup

April 5, 2006

• Water organ
• Bmi_(airline) - copy editing needed, see details on the discussion page. --Bshrode 05:18, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
  • I've had a go at this Birdhurst 13:42, 9 April 2006 (UTC)
• National Center for Women and Information Technology Notable organisation but current article reads like a (good) recruiting leaflet, not an encylopedia article. Cje 15:13, 5 April 2006 (UTC)

<strike>* Live at Woodstock - poorly written, reads like a review, and has been subjected to laughably bad "re-writes" that change nothing (see page's history). --Muugokszhiion 15:26, 5 April 2006 (UTC)<strike>

April 4, 2006

• Yamaha Vmax - Very messy, formatting, grammar, etc. Mikesayers 23:44, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
• Alec_Empire_Vs._Elvis_Presley - obscure album by well known artist, needs a copyedit by someone knowledgable about this album. Big in albania 23:01, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
• Tomb Raider Legend - sounds like someone's personal website. Does not follow editing style of Wikipedia. --Thorpe | talk 21:25, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
• Clement XI - slight tidying up necessary - eg the comment on resistance to papal bull, and what happened to the library (which appears to be in the same state as Schrodinger's cat). Jackiespeel 15:53, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
• firestop Needs to be wikified, broken up into separate paragraphs, and the tone needs to be fixed. Nothing links to it. Sir Isaac Lime 00:29, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Phew. I went in to attempt a clean up of this, and frankly, it's a mass of technical jargon and legal speach that to the the average reader would be completely non-understandable and unenlightening. I think what it needs is an engineer or architect to completely rewrite it in less technical terms and with more of a focus on what a firestop does and how it does it rather than the technical background of building codes and such. --Lendorien 00:23, 7 April 2006 (UTC)

April 3, 2006

• William Leidesdorff(SanFrancisco official w/estate)Document or consider AfD; a defender of his notability writes in summary "Something very weird going on; there seem to be two wholly different biographies of this individual online".Jerzy•t
• Today (album) needs to be completely rewritten. As I stated on the talk page: this article is a mess - it needs wikification, grammar, punctuation, formatting, and citation of sources, the whole nine yards. It doesn't read like an encyclopedia article, borrows copyrighted text without linking back to the source, is confusing to read - it's just not good at all.Fedallah 22:32, 3 April 2006 (UTC)
• Hipster_doofus What in the world is this entry about? Most of the details from "The Hipster" section is taken from the wiki entry of the same name. This isn't UrbanDictionary; it really could use much more explanation and cleanup. 68.205.127.198 05:54, 3 April 2006 (UTC)

April 2, 2006

• The article Montana Women's Prison, while sourced, isn't actually about the prison per se, but rather about the treatment of Native American prisoners there. Needs wikification, a quick grammar check, and a move to a more appropriate title. An article on the actual prison might be nice too. ;o) ～J.K. 06:32, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
• Apocrypha requires a lot of copyediting - preferably from someone knowledgable on the subject of Judeo-Christian Apocrypha. It could also use worldwide views, if other major religions have apocryphal books. Rarr 06:27, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
• The article on Kazimierz Moczarski, a Polish resistance fighter and dissident, is somewhat rambling: but clear notability and no obvious evidence of inaccuracies. Needs general cleanup: copy edit, split into section, and sources. Cje 16:30, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
• Gay Actors - Unwikified list, seems to be duplicate with List of gay, lesbian or bisexual people. I am not sure what to do with it. Move? Merge? Delete? - Mike Rosoft 17:06, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
  • I have moved it to List of gay, lesbian or bisexual actors and listed it at List of gay, lesbian or bisexual people. It still needs to be wikified. - Mike Rosoft 00:01, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
    • Lesbian actresses, the list's counterpart, is now on VfD and is bound to be deleted. Perhaps this one should be nominated as well?
• Thrawn Campaign - essentially a summary of the events of The Thrawn Trilogy, but written by a twelve-year-old. A merge may also be appropriate. Marblespire 21:20, 2 April 2006 (UTC)

April 1, 2006

• The Stephen Sargent a.k.a god tha lowercase G page is pretty much just pictures and what seems to be 2 articles smashed into one. I know nothing about this guy, so any help would be spactacular. Elsprucemoose 02:36, 2 April 2006 (UTC)

March 2006

March 31, 2006

• The Hungry City Chronicles article and its related articles including Mortal Engines, Predator's Gold, Infernal Devices, A Darkling Plain, Traction Cities, Anti-Traction League and Green Storm need a major improvement. Can some also help me make better articles for the characters. I know a lot about the series but I don't have the words and the ability to upload images. Please help if you care. This series is as good as Star Wars and Lord of the Rings. For more details and to contat me, please see talk page. MyNz 21:08, 31 March 2006 (UTC)

*UGOPlayer Mainly, the page as whole could use a bit of a rewrite, though some of it is good. A copmlete rewrite wouldn't be necessary. The talk page needs tons of cleaning though. --129.7.152.188 02:40, 31 March 2006 (UTC)

• Personal finance - This article has MAJOR problems with its tone. Also, there are possible copyright violation issues, but I wasn't able to confirm this well enough to start hacking chunks out of the article. --Takeel 03:57, 31 March 2006 (UTC)
• Ian Svenonius Needs formatting, possible POV issues, duplication of discography. Design 09:27, 31 March 2006 (UTC)
• Ocean surface wave needs critical attention. As part of Physical Oceanography, the article lacks proper scientific theory, and supporting diagrams & visual representations. Inkhearts 20:48, 31 March 2006 (UTC)
• Jackie Gleason Parts of this article, i.e. the section headings, seem a bit too glib. Is also for the most part unsourced. Gershwinrb 08:16, 1 April 2006 (UTC)
• Celebrity Fit Club. Not formatted well at all, I also have a problem with the glut of quotes given for the 3rd US season. I don't think this show (or the quotes) are notable enough to be included. Someone keeps adding them back on, quite annoyingly. Is there something that can be done to keep these "quotes" off? 24.176.16.12 21:11, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

March 30, 2006

• Jeanne Marie Bouvier de la Motte Guyon, Antoinette Bourignon and Quietism (Christian philosophy) could be rendered more elegant - slightly breathless etc. Jackiespeel 18:30, 30 March 2006 (UTC)
• Alexander_Breskin Seems genuine enough, just in need of attention. --Joe^Talk! 23:47, 30 March 2006 (UTC)

March 29, 2006

• Nobody Likes Onions - Fans section needs to be reworded, as is not really a encyclopedia style entry. It refers to the fans as fascist radicals. I think this is biased, or written incorrectly. I don't know what to write, so I will post this here. Samuzsnake 20:11, 29 March 2006 (UTC)
• Babylonian influence on Greek astronomy - Needs to be reorganized and some concepts explained more clearly; also it should cover more than just Hipparchus among the Greeks to make it a worthwhile article. I have put more ideas on the talk page. I created this with a cut-and-paste from the oversized article on Hipparchus (astronomer) which is also in need of attention; it has become an attractor for all sorts of things having to do with ancient Greek astronomy. Maestlin 18:56, 29 March 2006 (UTC)
• Back pain - Needs citations and fact checking; I highlighted the most egregious. --Cleanr 13:43, 29 March 2006 (UTC)
• Kagerou (band) - Most of the band members' biographys are biased and needs a NPOV clean up...--Makiyu 01:00, 30 March 2006 (UTC)
• Mothers Against Drunk Driving - Rich in POV and uncited claims, poor in substance and flow. -- Scientizzle 01:46, 30 March 2006 (UTC)

March 28, 2006

• Sprint Nextel Corporation - Has several grammatical errors. I have corrected quite a few, but more detailed editing is needed. Also, the article could use some organizational help. Much of the information could be better categorized. --Bshrode 22:05, 28 March 2006 (UTC)
• M60 machine gun — this article needs better organization/layout and removal of redundancies; a lot of information is unnecessarily repeated over and over, significantly increasing the article size (it is currently 33 kilobytes long). —Squalla 19:13, 28 March 2006 (UTC)

March 27, 2006

• Wall Street (film) - very disorganized, both Wall Street films (1929/1987) are discussed in the same article. -- Fearfulsymmetry 04:41, 27 March 2006 (UTC)
• Subarctic has improper tone, ambiguous and redudant language, also needs further wikification Catharticflux 21:03, 27 March 2006 (UTC)
• John Harrigan(actor/writer/filmmaker w/15 yrs activity)- Nearly a resume; prosify & wikify; test notability and copy-vio statuses; try to determine nationality (British?) and decade of birth.Jerzy•t
• Color legibility - needs wikifying and editing for style. And checking that we don't have a better article on the same subject, and merging if so. I tagged it for merge to color vision, but I'm not entirely sure whether that's necessary or desirable. —Blotwell 02:26, 28 March 2006 (UTC)

March 26, 2006

• Nazm has an untranslated example and isn't well explained. Needs help from an expert. Adambondy 22:27, 26 March 2006 (UTC)
• List of concept albums - needs case fixes, space punctuations and other small fixes; I suggest to sort this list and add some improvements to better legibility (sub-headers). Visor 14:21, 26 March 2006 (UTC)
  • I added level three headlines for all the years and alphabetized albums inside each year. That does not, however, address case, spacing, and other minor fixes. Miguel Cervantes 23:14, 27 March 2006 (UTC)
• Franco lodato - First of all, the title needs capitalising. Most of the article needs translating and structuring. The writing needs to be put in NPOV and categories are needed. This is a huge clean up. - Erebus555 15:21, 26 March 2006 (UTC)

March 25, 2006

All articles nominated for cleanup on this date have been cleaned up.

March 24, 2006

• Creationism NPOV seriously needed. See note on its talk page. 70.17.208.92 21:56, 24 March 2006 (UTC)
• Malton, Ontario--I can't do much more, than purge the second half of the article, obviously written by someone in the pictured apartment..Bacl-presby 18:21, 24 March 2006 (UTC)
• Donoughmore Commission and Donoughmore Constitution - needs to be wikified and changed to more encyclopedic style. - Mike Rosoft 10:58, 24 March 2006 (UTC)
• The Key to the Living/The Key to the Dead - needs wikifying and a structure. - Erebus555 17:31, 25 March 2006 (UTC)

March 23, 2006

• Pope Leo VIII - red top journalism style. Jackiespeel 17:54, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
• Silvanus P. Thompson has a big block of ugly unformatted text and needs things merged together. Sarge Baldy 00:55, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
• Incident at Loch Ness has pretty bad punctuation and the plot summary has a number of problems... it doesn't read well. SchnappM 01:47, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
• The Alvin Show is not written in the standard tone of a Wikipedia article. Gershwinrb 03:57, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
• Milton Berle needs to be rewritten for tone and neutral point of view. Gershwinrb 03:57, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
• Palletized load system - good information, but the text was entirely culled from the website listed as source. It also needs wikification and some serious formatting help.Fedallah 23:59, 23 March 2006 (UTC)

March 22, 2006

• Pope Benedict IX and Pope Gregory VII need "making more elegant"

March 21, 2006

• The article List of Killer7 characters has a lot of good information, but the majority of it is full of spelling errors, and there are some non-notable trivia that spoils vital points of the game. Danny Lilithborne 12:36, 21 March 2006 (UTC)
• Financial adviser - This article needs a more formal tone. It currently reads in a rather "chummy" tone. --Takeel 00:08, 22 March 2006 (UTC)

• Financial adviser - Cleaned it up a bit, reworked the tone of the article. Still needs a lot of work. Catharticflux 15:31, 22 March 2006 (UTC)

March 20, 2006

• Mariah Carey requires clean up; article is currently 57k long - almost twice the limit of 32k. A lot of the info on the page needs to be either edited down or removed completely. Rimmers 18:16, 20 March 2006 (UTC)
• Papal conclave, 1800 needs a bit of tweaking - rather a lot of red links. Jackiespeel 22:50, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

March 19, 2006

• Ali_Asgar_ibn_Husayn needs POV cleanup from a knowledgeable source. 68.106.216.59 23:36, 19 March 2006 (UTC)
• World Communist Movement needs a complete rewrite. Please help. Regardless of the justifications user:Soman has attempted to submit so far-- and with all due respect, they seem pretty weak to me-- that does not detract from the fact that the article needs a complete rewrite. Most of it reads like a list, and even the parts that don't are scattered and often ambiguous. I've posted this page on as appropriate a Talk forum as I can find, to see if we can't enlist other people in this overhaul project. If the request belongs in a more specific forum than this one, please be a friend and move it there. 71.255.198.147 22:24, 19 March 2006 (UTC)
• Ulster Project - sections need sorting. --Thorpe | talk 12:01, 19 March 2006 (UTC)
  • I tried to do some more editing on Ulster Project today. I'm obviously a new person here, but believe that this is an important article to be in the encyclopedia. Can someone put some suggestions on the talk page for improving its quality and conforming to the Wiki style? Thanks.--PaddyM 19:14, 19 March 2006 (UTC)

March 17, 2006

• List of Marilyns in England -- I'm very confused about how Marilyns are being listed on here. The Category:Marilyns of England lists them alphabetically if the tag is added to the page eg Dundry Down which I've done some bits as part of work on the Chew Valley on appears in alphabetical order while it appears on List of Marilyns in England under South Central England with the parent as Beacon Batch (Somerset), when Black Down and Walbery Hill (Berkshire) both are listed in South East England with the same parent. I'm not sure of the definition of "parent" as Beacon Batch & Dundry Down are oposite sides of the Chew Valley & doesn't comply with the rules at Topographic prominence. If these are going to be listed by area perhaps a section for the South West is needed & locations & parents need checking.Rod 19:44, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
• Pat Sajak really needs to be reworded. -- Wikipedical 00:26, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
• Alternative culture is a potentially worthy article, but it reads like original research and is badly written. I think the main problem is the author's assumed understanding of "the mainstream culture" as an unproblematic opposition to "alternative". Someone with a background in media studies and subculture research should take a look. --The Famous Movie Director 06:45, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
• House System at the California Institute of Technology was merged from several different articles some time ago and is currently in a very sorry state. There is no consistency between the treatments of the various houses, much of the factoids presented are of no interest to anyone outside of Caltech, and quite a bit of the article smacks of original research. As a former student I can affirm that pretty much every fact presented is true, but I don't know how much of it is really verifiable. 63.201.92.7 07:54, 17 March 2006 (UTC)

March 15, 2006

• Chester Olszewski- some work necessary (along with some of the other modern antipopes. Jackiespeel 17:32, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
• Clemente Domínguez y Gómez: the College of Cardinals directs to the one "belonging" to the Pope in Rome rather than the one intended. Jackiespeel 17:29, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
• Casino (Al Di Meola album) needs proper formatting for an article about an album, and the image needs to be properly aligned and resized. --Spring Rubber 02:16, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
  • I think I got most of it, but I'm not too familiar with albums, so someone else needs to double-check it. Miguel Cervantes 20:26, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
• Shelby - I have attempted to cleanup this disambiguation page, but I am not sure that it is in proper style now. - Mike Rosoft 15:20, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
• School massacre- Work neccesary in the Section noting occurances of School Shootings. --Z.Spy 04:00, 16 March 2006 (UTC)

March 14, 2006

• Rett syndrome - This may require a bit of checking. I've edited for sentence cohesion only. Someone should check the proper usage of syndrome/disorder in the article.
• Military fiat - some sections seem to have little to do with the military. Jackiespeel 18:15, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
• Carroll Rosenbloom - poorly formatted article about the legendary football coach. Has little separation into paragraphs, and no separation into sections. Basically a big wall of text. 198.234.255.234 17:36, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
• Germatoid - poorly formatted article about villain in Sailor Moon. Contains too much text, no separation into paragraphs, first mention of title not bolded, etc. --Geopgeop 06:51, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
• X-Cart - poorly written article with only one major contributor. Promotion for commercial software—claims to be "open source" but the software license prohibits use without purchase and says you have "no right to use, make, sublicense, modify, transfer or copy either the original or any copies of the Software or to permit anyone else to do so". May be an AFD candidate, unless the article can be rewritten and the software is worthy of an article. — Miles←☎ 00:05, 14 March 2006 (UTC) I'd like to add that it is also a mess vis a vis grammar and spelling and is clearly an advert.
• John Zachman(enterprise-software designer) Possible copy vio; in any case reads too much like press release.Jerzy•t

• Entire article is copied from website, submitted for copy vio. Quaere verum 21:10, 4 April 2006 (UTC)

• Surface epithelial-stromal tumour,Mucinous tumour,Brenner tumour. I rewrote these and just would like help "wikifying" them and improving their format. Please only rewrite content if it is necessary to help with clarifying the information.Pathologyresident 15:01, 14 March 2006 (UTC)

March 13, 2006

• Iceland at the 1992 Summer Olympics - prose-like, not NPOV. A honest attempt by a newcomer, it seems, but nevertheless one that needs to be cleaned up quite abit. -- Schnee (cheeks clone) 21:08, 13 March 2006 (UTC)

March 12, 2006

• R. J. Rummel. PoV panegyric; cleanup being attempted. Belated listing; marked for cleanup by SlimVirgin in February. Septentrionalis 16:47, 13 March 2006 (UTC)
• B₀ (B subscript zero) and MINTO- can someone clarify for persons not involved in the field? Jackiespeel 22:45, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

• The Norwegian POW Museum-Introduction is quite confusing, not sure if some of the info. is encyclopedic. Also needs to be wikified. Joshdboz 17:17, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
  • I've attempted a clean up and I think it's pretty good now. The tone is better, and I took care of most grammar and pov issues. Still needs sourcing as there's absolutely nothing there right now. Even foreign language sources would be better than nothing. But this is beyond the scope of my knowledge. Someone else will have to tackle it. As suck, I'm leaving it on Cleanup for someone else to handle. --Lendorien 02:04, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
• Diablo hacks - Spelling, format, use oh headings, and lists. Its also not Diablo but Diablo 2 hacks and cheats.

This article is misnamed, as it applies to Diablo 2, rather than the original Diablo. Wouldn't it be better to merge this with the Diablo 2 article? Alternately, I'd argue that this possibly should be a candidate for deletion. There's no sourcing, and I'm not sure any of this is truely relevant to wikipedia. I've done some cleanup of the article to at least make it presentable, but someone else will have to do the merging or submitting for deletion. ---Lendorien 01:20, 14 March 2006 (UTC)

Attempted cleanup. But I also think it should be merged with Diablo II or something. x42bn6 Talk 07:47, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

March 11, 2006

• RMC Paladins - Severe formatting problems. Might consider merging into Royal Military College of Canada. Utopos 04:24, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

• Visual DialogScript - This is deeply NPOV in places: Take "It can be used to create small and fast programs. VDS has a large number of dialog and graphical elements available to create professional looking programs." or "VDS uses easy to remember commands and functions, which refer to English words." (emphasis mine). Sounds like advertising to me. I'd be tempted to AfD it, but maybe some of it's salvagable. ~ Irrel 19:01, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
• Hart Hanson - A writer/producer of TV programs. (Has an IMDB entry.) Contains statements like "Hart Hanson was born in San Francisco, California somwhere in the late 50's to early 60's" and "He swam on different teams and was one step away from the Olymipics". - Mike Rosoft 19:03, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

March 10, 2006

• Taiwan independence: Article contains too many uncited claims. (Original comment reformatted/reworded. Atellus 00:45, 10 March 2006 (UTC) )
• Fresh Talents Music Project. A mess. Looks like someone experimenting with the wiki, but may deserve an article anyway. --Misza13 ^{T C} 12:42, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

March 9, 2006

• Ascension (Stargate) Very unclear. Uses horrible organization, wording, and is cluttered with too many small pictures everywhere. Tobyk777 02:17, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
• Cover girl (person) is not even close to being NPOV Richard cocks 00:07, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

I tried to clean this article up a bit, changes are documented in the talk page. STILL NEEDS WORK. Gaius Octavius Atellus 2:22, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

• Foster's Cup - Not sure if this even needs to exist as an article. Someone who understands the Australian Football League would be a great help in this article. Could this possibly a candidate to merge with the main AFL article?--Metros232 16:22 9 March 2006 (UTC)

March 8, 2006

Social interaction design needs tweaking and wikifying. Huge external links and see also sections, too. _└ ^UkPaolo/_talk^┐ 21:48, 8 March 2006 (UTC) Domestic terrorism is getting out of hand. See the talk page. Lambiam 21:56, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

March 7, 2006

• Feast of Asses. Unsightly unformatted text dump. Moriori 23:14, 7 March 2006 (UTC)

Somewhat done. Still needs improvement. Article looks better now, but it needs to be expanded, preferably by an expert on the subject. Atellus 03:56, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

• Toyota Chaser is written from an improper point-of-view, and has horrid formatting. SlickDizzy 03:02, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

This article could use a partial rewrite, as wording seems to be a problem. Also, possibly copyrighted images were added to the article. Atellus 03:21, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

March 6, 2006

• Neo Communism improper tone, I doubt this is the most usual meaning of the word, uverified, POV issues --Wikimol 19:08, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
• Joint Sitting, Australian parliament, 1974 needs work on grammar and typos especially. Also on some style aspects as well as general information which could be explained better and with more background, better headings etc. Shadow007 13:04, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
• Hiroshi Sugimoto needs some broader attention and an NPOV check. It's longer than a stub, but fairly thin on information. Carter 12:49, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
• Jazz dance needs verification of some facts and deletion of unverifiable statements if they exist there. It also may confuse different senses of the term, and it uses a fairly informal tone in places. --Officiallyover 05:43, 6 March 2006 (UTC)

March 5, 2006

• New Nemea needs a good copyedit and also a bit of basic info like where is the place located? And should the company mentioned get an article of its own, if it doesn't already exist? Mona-Lynn 02:32, 6 March 2006 (UTC)

• The article on Wildness is in need of attention. Currently it's not very encyclopedic or NPOV. Baiter 01:22, 5 March 2006 (UTC)

• The_Red_Pony needs to be grammar-checked by someone who is more familiar with the book than I (I haven't read it since high school.)

• Red Rain, needs formatting and proper paragraphing. --Thorpe | talk 14:25, 5 March 2006 (UTC)

• Hexis is confusing, lacks context, and possibly fails to present all sides of an argument. Hydriotaphia 14:37, 5 March 2006 (UTC)

March 3, 2006

• Kshatriya - Needs quite a lot of cleaning up on the bottom two-thirds of the article. Unfortunately, I don't know anything about it.  :-/ Guidelines at Wikipedia:WikiProject Hinduism should be followed. x42bn6 Talk 12:52, 3 March 2006 (UTC)

March 2, 2006

• The article on actor/singer Meat Loaf Aday needs a fairly simple once-over to remove some POV issues with portions of its word choice, adjectives, etc. It's an otherwise well okay article, it just currently read a little too much like someone who is awe of Meat Loaf wrote it --- Bobak 23:33, 2 March 2006 (UTC)

March 1, 2006

• The Turtle family Bataguridae contains many of the genus/species that are also listed on pages with a listed family of Geoemydidae. For example, Morenia petersi has a family of Geoemydidae, but its genus Morenia is listed on the Bataguridae page. Something doesn't seem quite right with this taxonomy. — RJH 21:21, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

• Free running needs some major style reworking and if possible some more information from an expert. I'm not really sure which cleanup template to use or whether there is a better place to put this request (I'm somewhat new at this editing business). If anyone can advise me on how to deal with such articles better, please stick something in my User Talk page. Maelin 11:51, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

The choice of templates in cases like this is always difficult, but here cleanup is probably right. However, freerunning is also known as Parkour for which there is a good article already. So the solution to this mess of an article is redirect it to Parkour, which is what I suggest be done (see my note on your talk page). Kcordina 11:58, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

• Attachment disorder looks like something out of a parent's manual for the condition, not an encyclopedia article. The exact same text is repeated as part of Reactive Attachment Distorder, which also includes other (better-written) sections. The articles are already under consideration for being merged. I've given them both the "inappropriate tone" tag. Quinnanya 16:40, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

Copyvio from Recognizing Attachment Concerns in Children By Dr. Becker-Weidman (scroll half-way down the page). 86.140.109.173 18:39, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

• King_Edward_VI_Grammar_School_(Chelmsford) seriously needs condensing and cleaning - it is far too long with a lot of irrelevant and biased material. 131.111.236.123 21:39, 2 March 2006 (UTC)

February 2006

February 28, 2006

• Kosovo contains a variety of discriminatory, derogatory and hateful paragraphs, added by anonymous vandals, who are trying to rewrite history by adding the inaccurate info, leaving no sources nor evidences to back up their verbal crusades against Christians in Kosovo. This article shouldn't exist as a such because it containts such an enormous level of hatred and propaganda, and it needs a serious cleanup by objective and non-political Wiki experts
• John Bond (footballer) - Non-sentences; 12 Cats (is this a sign of Cats that should be deleted & replaced with lists?) of which 2 look redundant, but my ignorance or dysfunctional Cat ancestors left me unsure; twice uses "currently", which should be replaced by e.g. as of 2005 if the edit that added it was from 2005 (unless continuing into 2006 is verifible).Jerzy•t

I think I've done that one. You may like to check though.--Cherry blossom tree 22:53, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

• Tech metal - Very sloppily put together. Awkward to read. Pertinent information needs to be kept together, instead of strewn about the article. Cparker 02:47, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

February 27, 2006

• TOCA Race Driver 3 - various parts need to be sorted and displayed propely. --Thorpe | talk 18:46, 27 February 2006 (UTC)
• Marc Bolan - disjointed, needs proper sections and other various tidying. I'll try, but I don't know much about the subject and it'd be nice for someone a little better to help. rob 06:30, 27 February 2006 (UTC)
• World Funeral - lacks conformity to encyclopedic standards
• David Aceveda - A clearer introduction to allow it to be more freindly toward those who have now idea about the show.

February 26, 2006

• List of Telecaster players - Loose criteria for inclusion, artists with questionable notability as Telecaster players, entries of little informative value, unalpabetized entries. Rohirok 00:15, 26 February 2006 (UTC)
• List of screamo groups - Major problems with this article, constant bickering of whether of a band is screamo or not, people ignoring the 3 revert rule. I tried to get it where if you could verify a band's status as screamo from documented proof from other wikipedia pages or public and popular reference sources like magazines or music websites then you could put it on there, people ignored that. Major POV problems because one person says screamo and another says the band isn't screamo. 90% of the bands that are screamo dont' have pages on wikipedia and theres no evidence that they even exist, people could be making up bands for all we know. Please someone fix this mess or just delete the article. Patman2648 17:08 26 February 2006 (UTC)
• Shadowrun timeline - I find the the timeline and its context not meeting the usual Wikipedia style. There is something about the current style that isn't really for wikipedia. --Hannu 22:01, 26 February 2006 (UTC)

I attempted to clean up the article a bit, getting rid of all the year subheadings so the TOC isn't so unwieldy. Still needs a Shadowrun expert to look over to clean up. There's a lot of sentence fragments as well as a complete lack of a decent intro paragraph to explain the content to put into context. --Lendorien 19:48, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

February 25, 2006

• Qalal - sent here as outcome of AFD debate. Punkmorten 14:55, 25 February 2006 (UTC)

February 22, 2006

• Petrodollar warfare - Content is unencyclopedic. Facts are disjointed and relevance not explained. Relevance of M3 withdrawal unexplained. --Mmx1 22:08, 22 February 2006 (UTC)
• Channel NewsAsia - only two paragraphs of prose and length lists of anchors/correspondents, most of which are unwikified. The last section may also be biased. Johnleemk | Talk 15:23, 22 February 2006 (UTC)

February 21, 2006

• Gladio need a serious house cleaning, see talk. Ten Dead Chickens 21:25, 21 February 2006 (UTC)
• Controversies about the Boy Scouts of America needs a lot of work. Consists of mostly unorganized "snippets" vaguely related to controversies. Alecmconroy 03:57, 22 February 2006 (UTC)
• John Hogg short, almost stub, possibly notable enough, but the name of the subject changes to 'Ludwig' in 2nd paragraph, and it has been like that since the article was created, so it's not obviously the result of vandalism. DogsBreakfast 10:45, 22 February 2006 (UTC)
• Tetsuya Chiba information all over the place, not enough wiki links for an outsider like me to understand what it's all about DogsBreakfast 11:38, 22 February 2006 (UTC)

February 18, 2006

• Jewel of Four Souls needs cleanup. Contains incorrect details, poor style ("UPDATE" section), and may even need to be merged with InuYasha. --Zeno McDohl 13:10, 20 February 2006 (UTC)

February 16, 2006

• Hourman Android needs cleanup. The article has many sections where information repeats multiply times, has some bad grammar, and sentences run-on.
• Asia requires some cleanup. The "History" section has particuarly bad grammar, poorly organized and unclear sentences, etc. Huw 20:01, 16 February 2006 (UTC)

Cleaned up History section, I need to stop procrastinating on homework so maybe I'll clean up the rest later. Being new to editing, I didn't know whether to put 1 or 2 spaces before the beginning of a new sentence (I put 1), but I'm sure there are better things to worry about...

It doesn't really matter - they get collapsed into one space anyway.  You can force a double space by making the first an &nbsp; as I've done here.  I do it on my own websites, but I'm not sure that doing it on Wikipedia is a good idea on the whole. -- Smjg 13:51, 17 February 2006 (UTC)

Shouldn't the middle east be its own section/region? At least in American English I think if you start talking about Asia it does not usually include the middle east.

February 15, 2006

• James Melville Gilliss needs cleanup. It appears that the information conflicts with the article on the US Naval Observatory, of which this person is (allegedly?) the (a?) founder Fan 20:28, 15 February 2006 (UTC)

February 14, 2006

• Jason Lee Middle School needs help. Sentences are missing information, and the whole article poorly written. Magdela 17:02, 14 February 2006 (UTC)
• Old Testament views on women needs a serious working, including moving the article from its specifically Christian name. PhatJew 11:21, 14 February 2006 (UTC)
• Longmorn needs some help; the article isn't very well-written, and there are large images inline. LrdChaos 19:47, 14 February 2006 (UTC)

February 13, 2006

• Tokyo DisneySea There is much to be said about the park, however it seems to be a jargon of information and not complete.
• Flora and fauna of Goa is an unsourced table with no extra-table text besides "Forest Cover in Goa". Michael Slone (talk) 01:16, 13 February 2006 (UTC)

February 12, 2006

• Macro-historical is an unverified, un-sourced list that doesn't appear to relate to the topic of macrohistorical theory. MLA 17:34, 12 February 2006 (UTC)

February 10, 2006

• Garret Bright - cut from a biog?

February 9, 2006

• Jessica Smith (editor)((fl. 1920s-30s) American editor & CPUSA(?) activist, married to 2 members of spy-ring support team)-Dump job by me, from husband's bio. Brutal copy editing, & research needed.Jerzy•t

February 8, 2006

• Nazia Iqbal: block of text inserted into {{pakistan-bio-stub}}. Needs rewriting and NPOVing. Sarge Baldy 17:20, 8 February 2006 (UTC)

• As a sidenote, it's not surprising to me that random IPs are finding ways to bypass the new article creation restrictions. Sarge Baldy 17:24, 8 February 2006 (UTC)

February 6, 2006

• The Secret Syde and Steve DeVito are fancruft textdumps. They don't always make sense ("some tracks gained airtime on the BBC in the Netherlands"). Aecis ^{Mr. Mojo risin'} 23:51, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
• Bob Fink. An AfD resulted in Keep and cleanup. Website dump full of inline links; needs fact-checking and copyediting to standard biographical format. Tearlach 20:47, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
• Saint Francis Seraph Church - wikification, encyclopedic tone needed. Just got off AfD. Johnleemk | Talk 15:21, 6 February 2006 (UTC)

February 5, 2006

• Johan van der Walt - Needs to be structured and needs grammar correcting. Also needs some more substantial content to be added. Chrisblore 00:06, 6 February 2006 (UTC)

February 4, 2006

• Fordonia leucobalia - this is quite messy. Needs expanding.
• Ishvara - conflation with God.

February 3, 2006

• Huaca. There is good information in here, it's just not organized and large portions of the article are very confusing, and perhaps some sections should be in a different article. I don't know enough about the topic to begin tackling it. Gsd97jks 04:05, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
• Table of Chinese monarchs - This list is incredibly confusing. I'm not quite sure if the whole table thing works, it looks hideous. List of Emperors of Japan has a better table anyway, makes the article look tidier. And there are other ways of doing it, like they have done in List of British monarchs. Looks much better. Plus "xuan1 zhao1 di4" + the infinite amount of other names should be written by using the accent markings, not numbers. I mean xūan zhāo dì, not xuan1 zhao1 di4. --Thorri 21:13, 3 February 2006 (UTC)

February 2, 2006

• Jacob Neusner - I have been meaning to get to this article for a while. Lots of information that looks like it was copied from somewhere else and needs rewriting/wikifying. Copy of sample text "But systemic analysis and interpretation requires us to ask questions of history and comparison, not merely description of structure and cogency. So in this exercise Neusner undertakes first description, that is, the text, then analysis, that is, the context, and finally, interpretation, that is, the matrix, in which a system has its being." The honorifics are over the top.

In short, it's an essay, not an encyclopedia article. The 116k Jacob Neusner bibliography also looks like overkill. Tearlach 04:50, 4 February 2006 (UTC)

• Garry Shider(late '60s - ? musician) + dumped ad section for his manager & brutally cop-ed'd lead section. - still keeps calling him the author's buddy Garry, & needs attention from music-savvy editor who realizes that the Golden Age of Rock is not the late 1960s, but rather 14 or 15.Jerzy•t
• John S. Barkat(mediation expert; probably auto-bio, but w/ definite signs of possible notabilty)+ I brutally wikified most of it, moved twd chronological bio, but ran out of steam. - In particular, i was not consistent abt which in-line ext lks to replace by rd or blue wiki-lks, and which to move to "Ext lks", and more dates must be researched or pried out of original editor.Jerzy•t

January 2006

January 31, 2006

• Caspian Tiger - Needs major grammatical and mechanical cleanup... also speaks in generalities and has information that should be linked to externally rather than elaborated on in the article. 68.81.164.226 04:14, 1 February 2006 (UTC)
• Tommy Westphall A potentially interesting article with messy setting out and some irrelevant information. --Cornflake pirate 07:37, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
• Malystryx - A dragon from Dragonlance series. A poorly written stub. More useful information can be found at Dragonlance Nexus, but note that the site is NOT copyleft. - Mike Rosoft 14:35, 31 January 2006 (UTC)

January 30, 2006

• Sabbatarianism - There's too much text to be a true disamig page, but no coherent articles to be easily split. -Acjelen 01:50, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
• Divje Babe - sorry about the relist, but this really needs attention. I don't trust its neutrality, as it's written entirely by the company hosting the texts of the musicologist on one side of the disputed topic (and they're complete ignoring hefty hints that Wikipedia:Autobiography strongly discourages this). However, the article is so technical and disorganised that it's impossible to tell whether it's a fair assessment of the subject. Tearlach 00:50, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
• McKenzie Friend - it seems as if the citations are not good and the intro para is not easy reading. The whole thing sounds more a like a law review article. Anyone like to help? Frelke 08:24, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
• Lallemant has just been restored. Probably an attempted disambig. Aecis ^{Mr. Mojo risin'} 22:40, 30 January 2006 (UTC)

January 25, 2006

• InterFaith - it starts with the title and gets worse: poorly structured, confusing, lots of irrelevent stuff, just a messy patchwork; probably needs rewrite. NicM 18:36, 25 January 2006 (UTC).

I have suggested a merge/restructuring with ecumenism and my Interreligious relations. There should be an article (or group of articles) on how religions interact and work with each other, coordinating groups etc. Jackiespeel 14:38, 27 January 2006 (UTC)

January 24, 2006

• Fear of the Dark (2001 film) - Never heard of this film but this is very POV and light on any info. --86.144.115.45 02:36, 25 January 2006 (UTC)
• Johnny Lee Clary - The entire text is lifted from the bio on his website. quadratic 06:23, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
• California electricity crisis - Jumbled citations HiFiGuy 01:15, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
• Dodge M37 G741 Cargo Truck - Infodumpish. The article could incorporate some of this information, or perhaps become a stub with a large table. Michael Slone (talk) 02:45, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
• Submerse - The article reads like a band vanity, but in fact it does make a claim of notability per WP:MUSIC (the band has made several tours in multiple countries). Still, it (especially the last paragraph) needs to be cleaned up for more appropriate encyclopedic tone, as well as ome general cleanup. - Mike Rosoft 13:34, 24 January 2006 (UTC)

January 23, 2006

• SMIDSY - What exactly needs done here? I cleaned it up slightly, and got rid of un-related info, it's still really small. --Highway 17:56, 29 January 2006 (UTC)
  • It should be redirected to Motorcycle safety where the phrase is referred to and explained. I have no idea how to do this I'm afraid.SOPHIA 21:30, 3 February 2006 (UTC)

January 22, 2006

• Creator deity - very limited scope.
• Dana Beal —alxndr ^(t) 21:15, 22 January 2006 (UTC)

January 21, 2006

• Greg Davis (musician) - Well to anyone who knows anything about him, this needs attention. It also needs a diambiguation to Greg Davis (coach). Rmt2m 01:36, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

• Major League Baseball television contracts - The article is currently 137 kb in size. It either needs to be split into sub-articles or dramatically condensed. Require major re-organization. --Madchester 09:05, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

• Episodes of Lost (season 1) -- article is far too long and needs to be trimmed using a synoptic style rather than an all-encompassing description of each episode. -- Jim62sch 16:00, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

January 20, 2006

• St. Augustine's High School It was put on the list, may need better tables RobbieNewton 17:13, 20 January 2006 (UTC)
• Virginia Cavaliers (historical). Not sure if this is copyvio: while source is a 1904 book, text is cut&pasted from here. Anyhow, it's unencyclopedic and biased: "But the people, who had been long imbibing the spirit of liberty in their forest home, at last rose in rebellion against the tyranny of their cynical old governor" and more in that vein. Tearlach 08:45, 20 January 2006 (UTC)

[Donald Fletcher]](Fly-by-night 1890s developer bio): 2 lines on him should be retained as stub; remaining 4 may need to go into Aurora, Colorado or be discarded as redundant. Style edit what remains.Jerzy•t

• Quiroga - needs wikification, possible turning into disambig. Just survived AFD, barely. Johnleemk | Talk 11:40, 20 January 2006 (UTC)

January 17 2006

• Trolling for fish - Consists almost entirely of a quotation from Boy's Own Book of Outdoor Sports. Needs turning into a proper article with that as a source (and with a more specific citation than "early 1900s"). Hairy Dude 01:31, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
• Antonio De Teffe -- see article's talk page Jim62sch 18:37, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
• Spiritus Christi sect, James Callan, Mary Rammerman - POV. Appears to be be biased against the group, too many statements of opinion. - Mike Rosoft 20:46, 17 January 2006 (UTC)

January 16 2006

• Cohabitation - A very large part of this article is a POV OR essay. This needs sorting out, perhaps even by removing unreferenced sections until they do become referenced. Aecis ^{Mr. Mojo risin'} 13:02, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
  • That's an original research dump that an anonymous user repeatedly adds to the article. I reverted boldly and drastically back a December 7 version before it was added. Article could still use attention. -Acjelen 18:20, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
• Modification of Political Parties Under the Restoration - context; possibly OR? Just survived AfD. Johnleemk | Talk 13:32, 16 January 2006 (UTC)

January 15 2006

• All pages contributed by User:Edbon3000 (contribs). A whole min-project could be made for these. Edbon3000 has been adding dozens of stubs for Filipino actors and directors from 1950 and earlier. All of them need help with formatting and grammar and categories. None of them have any sources and I haven't been able to verify any of them. It's been suggested in WP:ANI#User:Edbon3000 that Google simply doesn't show people in Filipino cinema but someone (maybe me) will start Afd'ing soon if some source isn't found. He seems to have stopped adding articles and isn't responding to anyone on his talk page. Good luck to whoever feels brave!  :) —Wknight94 (talk) 20:05, 15 January 2006 (UTC)

I'd say it was worth persevering. I was able to source Alessandra de Rossi, and "Alecs Bovick" was unfindable because she's actually called Aleck Bovick. Whether they're all notable is another matter. Tearlach 10:08, 16 January 2006 (UTC)

• 30footfall is an unorganized band article. Sycthos^Talk 03:17, 15 January 2006 (UTC)

January 14 2006

• Akhil Bharatiya Vidyarthi Parishad Needs cleaning-up ComputerJoe 21:00, 14 January 2006 (UTC)

January 13 2006

• Generation X. Appropriately enough the "13th" Generation article needs to be cleaned up on this 13th day of the new year. In addition to the rampant un-sourced opinion, the article is full of messy prose, much too much parenthetical clauses, and some rather bizarre running commentary in brackets throughout. I don't have the stomach for it today; I'm going to go have a nice lie-down.—LeFlyman 18:07, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
• McKittrick Canyon: direct lift of text from NPS website http://www.nps.gov/gumo/gumo/mckittrick.htm, likely PD but desperately needs rewrite to get rid of the unencyclopedic language. "During your visit to the canyon, strive to make your presence and impact indiscernible; consider yourself a guest in the home of creatures as significant as yourself." --Canley 07:32, 13 January 2006 (UTC)

I cleaned up the grammar, but not sure what to do about the language style --User:MrHand

• Role of Women in Yugoslavia in the Twentieth Century - needs wikification, NPOVing. Just came off AfD. Johnleemk | Talk 08:25, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
• Malaysian New Economic Policy#Criticisms - needs wikification, NPOV. Johnleemk | Talk 10:51, 13 January 2006 (UTC)

January 12 2006

• Support (mobile framework) - POV, barely survived AfD. Johnleemk | Talk 06:51, 13 January 2006 (UTC)

January 11 2006

• Experiential world Needs to be an encyclopedia article. :P I'm No Parking and I approved this message 23:39, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

Oh, lordy! This is one of a whole bunch of similar and completely unsourced managementspeak articles from one user, {{{2|Kkilian72}}} (talk • contribs). Looks to me like original research that needs a blitz on source citation. Tearlach 00:59, 12 January 2006 (UTC)

WP:VAIN! Tearlach 01:02, 12 January 2006 (UTC)

• Something Happens - no links, little format - may not be notable. Velela 11:29, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
• George Anthan & Manning, Iowa: need evaluation of lk & related content added by User:Vera Cruz, apparently a sock of User:Lir. I doubt Anthan is notable, & that the related material at Manning is relevant to it: i.e. consider AfD for bio & Lir-ectomy for the town.Jerzy•t
• Ramanathan V. Guha - WP is not a CV host. Just got off AfD with unanimity to cleanup. Johnleemk | Talk 12:43, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
• José María Arizmendiarrieta. Needs wikifying. ComputerJoe 20:14, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

January 10 2006

• CoStar Group - reads like an ad, just got off AfD. Johnleemk | Talk 08:21, 10 January 2006 (UTC)
• Black Hole/Stimpy's Invention - needs wikification, POV and fact check. Johnleemk | Talk 08:58, 10 January 2006 (UTC)
• TCF Financial Corporation - need Wikification and general clean-up. ComputerJoe 17:57, 10 January 2006 (UTC)

January 9 2006

• Family-friendliness:Very rough start; as i say at its talk, we need a decent article to lk the 165 PoV uses of "Family friendly" to (since very few of them can afford to nuance it sufficiently within the article).Jerzy•t
• Planetary Society is written in the first person. — Ливай Image:Anarchy symbol neat.png 12:58, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

It was a copyvio from [2]. I've reverted to pre-copyvio version, which still needs attention. Tearlach 13:20, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

January 8 2006

• 1957 World Series - Nice article with a lot of loving care put in - but just doesn't work. See Talk:1957 World Series for my suggestions. —Wknight94 (talk) 23:34, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
• Rain gardens - Looks somewhat like a how-to guide/promotional. (A part of the text has been copied from [3], but the contributor seems to be the text's author.) - Mike Rosoft 00:33, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

January 7 2006

January 6 2006

• Robert S. Johnson This WWII ace deserves more than a couple of casual notes. Chris the speller 20:49, 6 January 2006 (UTC)

Changed from "inappropriate tone" to "U.S. military biography stub" Richard 05:57, 18 April 2006 (UTC)

• Monsour del Rosario - Barely even an article... DrIdiot 02:07, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

January 5 2006

• Ismael Zambada García - The recent anonymous edit has made the article a mess. Information needs to be checked. - Mike Rosoft 23:44, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

January 4 2006

• Transcendental argument for the existence of God - Poorly argued and unclearly written. Thomas Ash 23:17, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
• University College of the Fraser Valley - poor layout, lack of information, general overall cleanup needed. Luke 23:02, 4 January 2006 (UTC)

• A complete lack of information really. Put the pictures in a gallery. That cleaned up the layout issue. Put an expand tag on it for now. Never edited an article on a college. :( I'm No Parking and I approved this message 03:34, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

• Fire boss --Misza13 ^(Talk) 20:46, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
• Suburbass - pervasive typos, coding and grammatical errors --Foxxygirltamara 07:41, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
• Dates of classical music eras - some potential here, but may be better off merged -Acjelen 18:20, 4 January 2006 (UTC)

January 2 2006

• Curly Howard - Good article, has some awful style elements, though . Not quite sure what direction this should take. -Tim Rhymeless (Er...let's shimmy) 05:46, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
• Leonidas Kavakos - the text has been copied from various websites. Not sure if it's a copyvio either. Acyso 07:29, 2 January 2006 (UTC)

January 1 2006

• OpenDocument licensing - This article is not Encyclopedic, it is just a sum of citations and does not present clearly, each side point of view. The material is probably there, but it needs to be put in a proeminent position with citations to support each point of vue. The citations must be also be done according to WP standards i.e in italics or/and with identations. Please help, this is an important and controversial issue --Khalid hassani 12:53, 1 January 2006 (UTC)

December 2005

December 31 2005

• List of towers - The article is huge, has large amounts of unverified information, and may need to be split. Zer0fighta 19:46, 31 December 2005 (UTC)

Laci Peterson - Urgent need of cleanup it is almost as bad as the Douglas Bader article ws yesterday (see below) -Chazz88 13:40, 31 December 2005 (UTC)

• Irish Property Bubble - Reads like an essay, smells like original research, and reeks of POV. Dig the scare quotes around the word "experts" in the first sentence. Ξxtreme Unction|_{yakkity yak} 22:51, 31 December 2005 (UTC)

December 30 2005

• Poser - A lot of poor grammar. Rufous 00:35, 31 December 2005 (UTC)

Tidied up and rewritten in places. My first cleanup so if someone else could look at it, would be appreciated --Phl3djo 02:14, 6 April 2006 (UTC)

• Jamie Kennedy Experiment - Messy needs some word cleanup (past tense) some unecessary tv airing refrences Mike 17:37, 30 December 2005 (UTC)
• DICOM Group - is currently a promo page. --Tagishsimon (talk)
• Paliwal - Appears to be a text dump. - Mike Rosoft 18:05, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

December 29 2005

• Houghton, Washington - Ship stuff needs to be organised; paragraphing not so hot. --Trafton 09:47, 29 December 2005 (UTC)
• Les Claypool's Wikiquote - Needs cleanup, for unknown reasons.
• Jean-Marc Gauthier - Needs to be wikified. Reads like a CV. You can call me Al 20:37, 29 December 2005 (UTC)
• Peter Plogojowitz - Not an encyclopedia article; rather, just a dumped original text (which seems to be rather old and, as such, in public domain). - Mike Rosoft 23:18, 29 December 2005 (UTC)

December 28 2005

• Dutch literature#The Twentieth Century - Rest of article is OK, but 20th century developments are yet to be done. -- Curt Woyte 11:17, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
• still needs work ping 08:06, 20 March 2006 (UTC)
• Leven, Fife Needs cleanup and perhaps a little wiki work --Chazz88 11:50, 30 December 2005 (UTC) (Originally posted earlier on in day but forgot to timestamp)

December 27 2005

• Trinity Blood Canon - Large amount of content with inconsistent formatting and stylistic issues (the article reads as though it were partially or entirely copied and pasted from an online forum, complete with sidenotes within the article to those reading it requesting clarification).
• Guiding Light - Too much point of view and awful grammar (way, too, many, commas!)
• Executive Order 12711 - Excerpt from 1990 executive order regarding Chinese nationals, completely lacking context. Saint Midge 03:30, 28 December 2005 (UTC)

This should be deleted. It is simply an excerpt from a 1990 U.S. government document (executive order), posted by an anonymous user, probably copied from here: [4]John Broughton 23:01, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

Nominated for deletion. Richard 05:24, 18 April 2006 (UTC)

December 26 2005

• The Indonesian Ethnic Chinese and the view of nationhood - This article reads like an essay or a homework assignment, especially the title and the opening sentence. If it is not original research, it needs to provide references and be re-written as an encyclopedia article. -Acjelen 05:58, 26 December 2005 (UTC)
• List of Christian apologetic works - Needs work on lists. Needs meaning of list and what the whole thing includes. Very large article. - (Erebus555 13:57, 26 December 2005 (UTC))
• Centaur Technology - Looks like a promotional. - Mike Rosoft 18:24, 26 December 2005 (UTC)
• Panamanian Spanish - Wikipedia is not a dictionary. The list of words should be trimmed (only the most significant - and verified - words should be left). It should be made into an article about the dialect. - Mike Rosoft 19:06, 26 December 2005 (UTC)

December 25 2005

• Borregos Salvajes - ITESM Campus Monterrey I added context, but it needs a lot of polishing. It lost something on its way from Spanish to English. Chris the speller 16:08, 25 December 2005 (UTC)
• RDRAM This article has some very good basic information, however, it could be better formatted and contain more specific information on types of RDRAM and the history of the technology. 69.118.247.101 17:10, 25 December 2005 (UTC)

December 24 2005

• gold cluster compound linkless and extremely specifc paragraph which conveys very little useful information. 213.105.81.183 13:30, 24 December 2005 (UTC)

December 23 2005

• Economic history of Britain - several sections, namely Breakdown of Pax Britannica and New Imperialism and Britain and the Colonization of Africa, Imperialism in Asia need to be shortened and broken up into smaller sections. --apollo2011 00:36, 23 December 2005 (UTC)

December 21, 2005

• Publicity - haphazard approach to orthography.
• Environmental Toxins and Fetal Development - I don't know enough about the subject to fix it, but it looks like a POV essay to me. Tearlach 02:23, 21 December 2005 (UTC)

Cleaned up references, made footnotes, sectionned, some grammar. Really needs an expert, not cleanup. - FrancisTyers 01:14, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

December 20, 2005

• Non-Muslims Interactants with Muslims During Muhammad's Era - needs to be renamed (to what I don't know), rewriting in encyclopedic tone, and more context. Johnleemk | Talk 09:22, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
  • I have set up the page Interreligious relations (which needs developing) which is probably a good starting place. Jackiespeel 13:01, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
  • Mostly done, just really needs moved to a better title. NicM 14:18, 20 December 2005 (UTC).
• Rabbit Redux needs a little cleanup after merge. Easy for someone who knows the book. Chris the speller 23:45, 20 December 2005 (UTC)

December 19, 2005

• RLM numbering system for gliders and sailplanes - Needs tidying up, perhaps restructuring. NicM 15:57, 19 December 2005 (UTC).
• Arcbeetle - Barely survived AfD, needs wikifying and rewriting in encyclopedic tone. Johnleemk | Talk 16:15, 19 December 2005 (UTC)
• Peter-Ernst Eiffe - Needs wikify, copyedit, partial translation, etc. There is a substantial article de:Peter-Ernst Eiffe if any German speaker wants to add content. NicM 18:28, 19 December 2005 (UTC).
• William S. Farish suite: about 20 titles (including the 2-month-old C-u nom William Stamps Farish II), probably counting rdrs like WSF IV to WSF III, that are hits in [5]. See Talk:William S. Farish#Desperately Seeking Cleanup.Jerzy•t
• Abatwa - Someone added a conflicting viewpoint but didn't work it into the article. Contains the text "This is an incorrect reading of the myth of the Abatwa." -GregoryWeir 20:40, 19 December 2005 (UTC)

December 18, 2005

• Cameo-Parkway Records - confusing, poor grammar. NicM 17:20, 18 December 2005 (UTC).

December 17, 2005

• Education_in_Germany - it seems to me that parts of this article were translated by Babelfish or some other automated service. Additionally, some of the information (particularly in the "Situation today" section) appears outdated or incorrect. I work in a German Gymnasium and some of the minor details are blatantly incorrect, at least for our school! Mirandom 07:27, 17 December 2005 (UTC)
• Lyor Cohen - needs more copyedits, organized into subheadings. --Howrealisreal 21:44, 17 December 2005 (UTC)

I copyedited this somewhat, but it still needs a bit more work. Perhaps someone more familiar with the subject could organize it into subheadings? Molimo 23:54, 17 December 2005 (UTC)

December 16, 2005

• Mail-order bride - Style, relevance, sources and accuracy need serious attention. See talk page. --The Famous Movie Director 00:54, 17 December 2005 (UTC)
• The Great Scandal - Original subject charges that both Protestant and Roman Catholic clergy failed to use their moral authority to condemn Adolf Hitler. This article presents it only as an accusation against Roman Catholics. Article came up for deletion a month ago: I voted keep and cleanup. The omission has not been corrected. Durova 16:05, 16 December 2005 (UTC)
• Gulf rupee - consists mainly of an excessively long article excerpt. Alr 01:34, 16 December 2005 (UTC)

December 15, 2005

• tripwire - Should be a disambig page I think, or atleast __ NOTOC __ added. --Unforgettableid | talk to me 08:56, 15 December 2005 (UTC)
  • Basically is a disambig page already. I would second that. Kntrabssi 18:18, 15 December 2005 (UTC)

December 14, 2005

December 13, 2005

• M.O.D. Needs a much better article tone Avador 19:53, 13 December 2005 (UTC)

December 12, 2005

• The_Fabric_of_the_Cosmos- "Greene's language is witty and irresistible" hardly counts as NPOV, among other problems. AustinZ 21:30, 12 December 2005 (UTC)
• Robert Siodmak - Seems to be taken from a book (I'm not sure). Anyhow, it needs to be wikified and also divided into sections to make it readable. (Entheta 18:38, 12 December 2005 (UTC))

• InterPride / IALGPC - Needs wikification and some rewrite. Not sure if article is notworthy as I know nothing about them, but google has almost 34K results listed [6] - PS2pcGAMER 22:37, 12 December 2005 (UTC)

December 11, 2005

• Uberto Zanolli Seems partially translated from Spanish and/or Italian. I did some cleanup, but many words escape me - corrs, catedratic, ponencies. Chris the speller 19:29, 11 December 2005 (UTC)

Needs checking for copyright, being a close translation of the official website. Tearlach 17:37, 15 December 2005 (UTC)

December 10, 2005

• List of fiction that breaks the fourth wall - the article contains extremely long lists without any uniform formatting of the items, making finding anything extremely difficult --Ilyag 17:42, 10 December 2005 (UTC)
  • Geez, what a mess! I'm just posting here to say that I'm working on it, but it may take a while. I've been on it for a few hours and it's still pretty bad. It has potential though, so I'll keep at it. -- edi 02:32, 19 April 2006 (UTC)
• Željko Ražnatović - some issues were already listed on talk page, including poor grammar, bizarre claims and no sources whatsoever, confusing chronology, weasel word, and a questionable NPOV. --Quinnanya 04:52, 11 December 2005 (UTC)

December 9, 2005

• Senior Advisor - This article needs attention and expansion. I'm not sure if the various governmental posts it mentions shouldn't have their own page, and other examples ought to be given. Someone with an understanding of the intricacies of US government should take a look. -Tim Rhymeless (Er...let's shimmy) 06:13, 10 December 2005 (UTC)
• Linguistic modality - moved here from Grammatical modality. needs help from philosophers, linguists, languagers. – ishwar  (speak) 19:55, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
• Roland Clark is not very wiki. Looks real, not vanity, but ugh! Ronabop 09:29, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
• Yehia Hakki - Needs wikifying. Johnleemk | Talk 10:14, 9 December 2005 (UTC)

December 8, 2005

• Mervyns - Has major POV problems, among other things. --ApolloBoy 02:12, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
• Non-chronological Report - Poorly written, orphan, unwikified article, probably not at its best name. --Jake 09:43, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
• U-Haul - "Safety Issues" section is very poorly written. The Chief 16:44, 8 December 2005 (UTC)

December 7, 2005

• Queen's_University_street_parties Not a well written article.

Possible candidate for deletion I think. Ben Aveling 07:18, 21 December 2005 (UTC)

• Free to Be Dirty! Live Cmadler 17:49, 7 December 2005 (UTC)

December 6, 2005

• Philosophical views of suicide This is another well written piece in need of attention. Divided into arguments for and against, arguments for suicide take up over 95% of the article. Only 2 lines of text oppose it. Durova 08:01, 6 December 2005 (UTC)
  • A curious pairing! Mohamed Atta al-Sayed was acquainted with both topics. Metarhyme 20:36, 6 December 2005 (UTC)

December 5, 2005

• Buck English (Western outlaw (Calif?)): check for copy-vio; style; make ext lks out of "References"; be sure state/terr is Calif & say so.Jerzy•t
• Morgan Roadster - Many problems, such as inconsistent formatting, no background info (just specs), no sources, etc. Badly needs to be rewritten. PS2pcGAMER 09:44, 5 December 2005 (UTC)

December 4, 2005

• Gaia philosophy - redundant material.
• Kamal Heer - Currently has terrible formatting, information should be presented in a more appropriate manner. --Spring Rubber 05:04, 4 December 2005 (UTC)
  • I hit the mechanics and formatting but I'm not sure of Punjabi naming conventions and so forth, so someone else might want to take another look.
• Jianzi - I merged 4 articles into this and did some copyedit on "featherball" section, but the 4 sections need to be integrated, right now it's 4 views of the exact same sport. Chris the speller 17:19, 4 December 2005 (UTC)

April 21, 2006